The Mistress by Martine McCutcheon- chapter 17- the end

Ok These last chapters really race on in speed, which in turn looses story content and you loose the will to live. It starts off that Mandy comes back from Paris after a romantic liason with Tommy a Italian Photographer, she ignores Jake completely and ends up going to LA to do this party that her work has been putting together, some how god only knows how, Jake happens to be there and the couple get it back together, it has to be doomed right? Jake leaves his wife and sets up home with mandy who finds out she's pregnant, then quickly has the baby Bonnie, but she finds it difficult having Jake around all the time and encourages him to go back to live with his wife, so they can continue to play the Mistress game, obviously there is nothing going on with his wife he just lives in the house with her and stuff. I thought it started to get pointless way before this but I really lost the care to finish it once she found out she was pregnant. I did however finish the book and I am glad to be at the end and be on to reading the next book now. I didn't rate it at all, let me know what you guys thought.

The mistess by Martine McCutcheon chapters 11-17

Still not loving the book it's a good story, but very unhappening the past few chapters have built a more rounded story for Jake and Mandy's relationship as it looks fated to end after Mandy's sister Olivia tries to take her own life after her husband wants to marry his mistress. Then Mandy spots Jake with his beautiful wife Helen, which throws another spanner in the works, after Mandy's job promotion Mandy decides a holiday away with her sister is what is needed. Jake though has other plans and wants to take Mandy to Paris. Against her better judgment Mandy postpones her trip with Olivia to go to Paris. Jake then stands Mandy up, what exactly is he playing at? A new love in Paris may beckon for Mandy. I hope it's a happily ever after for Mandy without Jake.

The mistress by Martine McCutcheon chapters 6--11

The story developes further and is done rather quickly, Mandy comes to her senses about her fling with Jake when she sees her sisters husband with his mistess. It appears that friends and family all have advice for Mandy, her friends come over to offer supportas an allout arguement breaks out between Assia and Deena. The story goes on to suggest that if your mate sets you up on a blind date you should avoid it at all costs. After a very disturbing blind date, Mandy starts up her affair with Jake. The writing still seems to be held back like she is too afraid to say what she really feels which is really disappinting sadly.

The mistress by Martine McCutcheon chapters 1-5

I love how this book starts, it's kind of sex and the city with how it starts, for me though there is a bit too much ellipsis in it, I totally understand why it's there, to give the characters more of a 3 dimensional aspect but I find that a bit boring. Mandy as a character is believeable and who wouldn't want job like Mandy's as a party planner for the rich and famous. Mandy's first meeting with Jake is really sweet I liked how that was written but as their romance develops quickly I expected my detail on the sex stuff, maybe it's just me whising it was a black lace novel, but for me it started well and then just felt like Martine had lost her nerve to make it really steamy. Maybe it's me but if you're going to write smut at least write it like your comfortable with it.
If anyone else has comments to make about the book please do I am off to read the next five chapters.

Up and coming reads

Hi everyone
I hope loads of people get involved in this. I have wanted to join a book or readers group for ages, and never been able to find one at a time that suits me. So here goes at starting my own, so join in have your say and suggest books for us to read.
I have to admit to being a Reading junkie so I get through books pretty quick but please take Reading in your own time, it's not a race I promise.

I have three books so these will be the first to go through:
The Mistress by Martine McCutcheon


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Vampire Diaries volume 1 the awakening and the struggle by L.J Smith
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Vampire Diaries volume 2 the fury and the reunion by L.J Smith
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I will make comments chapter by chapter depending on chapter size there maybe a few chapters grouped together, please leave your thoughts on what I say and what you think about the books and happy Reading.